Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Wedding Poem

pink city dirty
be teaching
wait here
on muddy water
Mississippi

yellow school bus
come riding
sit here
on green seat
next to me

white mountain
go climbing
abide here
on blue sound
near sea

gold round finger
is loving
stand here
on Red Apple Earth
between home

1 comment:

  1. lovely - almost villanelle in its structure. I like the parallel structure of the third line in each stanza, a simple command.

    It's nice to write poetry (and have it read, too).

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